trust filled eyes gazing
they can look into your heart
love is a wet tongue
Author notes
Prompt: Picture
Picture Credit: Author Unknown
Haiku (5/7/5)
A contest entry
- Animals Love A Haiku Quickie by carole21.
900 points, ended July 24, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical Comments Always Welcome
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Beautiful write ...
I simply ADORE that last line!
Blessed be.
Myra
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I love the last line. It is so appropriate to what you said in the first two and I have always felt that when my dog gives me a lick it is to say, I love you too. Good luck in the contest. ~ Joyce
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a very sweet write . . thanks for the contest entry
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LOL, love is a wet tongue, that's so cute. (I think...you meant it cute didn't you
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Great job!
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this is great.i love the picture.it rules and a wet tounge.lol random!best of luck in the contest.
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Awww How cute is that!!! you did such a wonderful job! A wet tongue XD funny! and cute at the same time!! lol.. Best of luck!!
Angel
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Well now.. hehe (ponders) Such a sweet write to the pic..best of luck my friend.
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A kiss is a kiss at my age
... Thank you for the sweet comment...
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Shucks Ken, you're still a spring chicken..
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I love animals and I love this sweet haiku about their love for us. This is just wonderful. The last line really made it POP!
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