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Together

Until now
I have marched
to the drum
which only I hear.
You have marched
to yours.

From today
we shall march,
hand-in-hand,
sometimes to your beat,
smetimes to mine,
but always together.

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  • Eternal Cascade
    August 6, 2008

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    hi again,

    i love this i think its a beautiful statement for a man or a woman to make to their partner on their wedding day i would love to say it but i would also love to have it said to me its very powerful indeed!
    at the start i hadn't realised the style of writing i wanted but now know that i wnat somehting that's not in the words of the bride or groom as it will be a friend who recites it in church!!

    a great job thankyou so much for entering,

    Much Love,
    JJ x


    • Shenton silver member
      August 6, 2008
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      Thankyou for reading and cmmenting. Maybe you friend could read this in church:

      May they share a lasting love,
      and love the sharing.

      May they share a mutual care,
      and love the caring.

      May they live a tranquil life,
      and love the living.

      May they give each other space,
      and love the giving.

      Best wishes from 'down-under'.

      Shenton


  • Eternal Cascade
    July 24, 2008
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    beautifull!!

    thankyou for entering, i will be back to comment when the contest ends,

    good luck,

    JayJay