Let Me Break, Let Me Fall
I couldn't take it any longer
The pain, the suffering
You didn't even know it
So leave me alone
And go do what you do best:
Hurt the people around you
Leave Me Alone and
Let Me Break, Let Me Fall
A contest entry
- This Is Me Breaking Down by Faerie.Princess.
500 points, ended August 15, 2008, 23 entries
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Had to right the feeling
Comments
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this is a great poem, and i think many people fee like this at times. its short, but i think its works, for you say everything you need to. really good poem, i love it. good luck in the contest
Thank You For Entering
always keep writing -
Bravo
It may be short but sometimes the shortest poems carry the strongest message. I like this one very much...
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