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Renea I'm Sorry

 

There was a flower upon the earth
It was some thirty years ago
And for a while I got a glimpse
Of her petals she would show

The beauty of this special flower
Has never left my mind
All I do is stop and think
My thoughts run to her each time

Her colors etched into my mind
As though I’d seen her yesterday
Like I was going off to work
And saw her along the way

Yes the truth it must be known
That I went and broke her heart
But was mine that never healed
I deserved that from the start

It has been so many years
And I once did have a chance
But I dared not ever hope
She would grant me one last dance

Surely our time is growing short
And I’ve wasted most of mine
Never seeking out that flower
Not looking for that perfect vine

As I lie awake in bed
My mind runs back to see
The memory of that gorgeous flower
How now she would look to me

How I picture in my head
What that flower looks like today
Is still as stunning to me now
As she was on that first day

Author notes

A poem of love lost thirty or more years ago I am still searching for her today

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  • lizwicker
    August 29, 2008
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    I hope you find her and she can see the love for her you still have and want to give!


  • poetic-enigma21
    August 6, 2008

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    very well written , i hope you find your lost love very soon.
    thanks for sharing
    good luck
    cheers