Soft light lingers
arousing desire.
Yet,
within fingers tenderly touched,
an intimate moment is led;
relinquishing passion
to the breath of love
where limbs locked
within embrace
measure smiles with
flowered blooms,
remembering true need.
Author notes
Prompt: I don't just need a man, I need love
50 words or less
35 words
A contest entry
- Women poets only - I don't just need a man, I need love. by paulcreates.
600 points, ended August 5, 2008, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So romantice but sensuous as well and very appropriate for that prompt.
Congrats on the bronze trophy. -
I like it!!!! your words are like little feathers tickling deep within the soul
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Very Nice
This was very good as always my friend. Hope you have been doing well.
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Wow you took on a challenge here I see. You swirled love and intimacy all within the same poem and still made the differentiation enough to get your point across. I like this quite mature write.
Thank you for entering.
Paul -
like the walk
through the park, flowers bloom, and birds sing,
such beautiful imagery your pen does bring! EXCELLENT!
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Soft and sensual...!!! This is another beauty by you... A wonderful description of the land beyond lust where lovers of ladies reside... Sigh!!!
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Beautiful love poem and I think the form adds to the poem and the voice is soft and mysterious. Lovely!
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