Embered skies adorned with jeweled delights,
span spaciously.
Tapestries speckled with hue's of autumn colors,
breath life into sunset backdrops.
Stained pieces of glass adjoined by rays of sunshine,
interlude with sapphire waters causing spectacular
displays of amazement.
Waves crashing amidst shorelines,
leave their footprints on sandy beaches.
Tranquil fragrances dissipate into light
gentle breezes alluring curiosity.
Muted words allow other senses to gain freedom,
reveling in exploration.
Underwater sensational life for a brief moment, connect.
Author notes
Prompt one:The photograph (from google images)
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Prompt Contest by Ceridwens Soul.
525 points, ended July 24, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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nicely done! Congratulations!
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Thank you
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The use of senses with the prompt combines to form a piece full of colour and imagery.
'Tranquil fragrances dissipate into light
gentle breezes alluring curiosity.'
These lines stand out for me, they are just so intense.
Great write!
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your poetry is no doubt beautiful but at a point it starts sounding all the same.
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Genius that you are, you took the name of the host and painted such a beautiful picture, just as the Impressionists would have done! I loved the line "Waves crashing amidst shorelines leave their footprints on sandy beaches." A twisted take on "footprints in the sand." The use of colors here is dynamic!
Love and
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Linda
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