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The One

Eyes filled in blanks no word no thanks
clothes made to disappear
everyone appraised from bus's rear

word caught here and there
whispers about bulges in underwear
only one came back to the rear

sat boldly down not a word not a sound
licked a lip with slow tongue
not too old, but no longer young

silence now from the giggling pair
squirming now in underwear
as stranger rubs a tight jeaned thigh

wants to know who wants to be high
all volunteers off at next stop
ringing bell and rising up

these three friends now disembark
adventure bound on a lark
making way into near by wooded park

in secluded water tower stairs
fromhe ended jaunt and surveyed the pair
each willing not knowing what or where

adventure now turned to smoke
rolled and lite and offered toke
each inhaled the J with eager greed

as lips consumed and wet the weed
talk turned to love's lust
strange members and un-riden steeds

hands to waists and lips to taste
while one inhales
other two kiss and mingle tongues

now the secret tryst has begun
round they go with dizzy speed
each coming closer to the deed

mingled now tongues and weed
hands explore and zippers found
one member now is passed around

from hands strokes it grows in dark
soft to large and then to hard
the one secret found in the park

six hands with grips and finger licks
enter and leave wet and moist
to moans and mouths go the surprises

each descends to the other's pleas
and the one is captured
from their knees by two mouths with ease

The one is shared now between the two
which one is there he has no clue
as no identity is ever spoke
between the suck and the stroke
jeans are pulled away from one
no clothes will now imped the fun
faster now and with greed
two mouth ride their lust steed
wanting moans and then the thrust
mouths and hands bring forth seeds
captured now inside the one
all stream out until it's done
but shared soon to the other's tongue
the white joy from their special one.

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  • Dalaney gold member
    August 3, 2008
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  • tara wilson gold member
    August 2, 2008
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    Oh, this is horrible...sorry..thanks for entering.


  • Ho74pp1eP1e
    July 25, 2008

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    Now that is a walk in the park so to say. it was a great little tale of lust, drugs and fun. Good luck.


  • sensualbutterfly
    July 25, 2008

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    Oh wow!!!That was hot, twisted, exciting and hot again. Great job!! But you never cease to amaze me with your writing.


  • hotchocolate gold member
    July 24, 2008

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    mingled now tongues and weed
    hands explore and zippers found
    one member now is passed around

    Love it!!!


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    July 24, 2008
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    Damn Carry on on dear this is getting good


  • Ms Sexy silver member
    July 23, 2008
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    Ohh you naughty boy Good write

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