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Shining Love

The sizzling sunshine now bows to the night
and silent moonbeams radiate soft light.
This special time brings snapshots of the day,
snuggled within loving simplicity of your embrace.
Remembered snippets of sparkling waters wash
across two hearts now encompassed by love so sincere.

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Summer Wordbank.
Words Used In Order - SIZZLING, SUNSHINE, SILENT, SOFT, SPECIAL, SNAPSHOTS, SNUGGLED, SIMPLICITY, SNIPPETS, SPARKLING, SINCERE.

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  • iamlost gold member
    August 6, 2008

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    I love that first line, the images and thoughts contained in it. The entire poem is superb, a good use of the wordbank, keeping the feelings that all those words evoke.
    Well penned.

    ~lost


  • Frozentearz
    July 25, 2008

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    awwwwwww how very very sweet this is
    a wonderful soft poem great usage of the word bank
    Thanks for joining in.
    Love and Light
    Frozentearz


  • Frogzter gold member
    July 24, 2008

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    So much said in such few words here! I loved the last two lines. A great job with the word bank! Thanks so much for entering and best wishes,

    Frogz~


  • Pete Greenslade gold member
    July 24, 2008
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    i am reading a lot of poems amout sunshine. great how it blends in with night fall good luck xxx


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    July 23, 2008

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    I'm impressed!

    What a wonderful write you created with the words put to you. You can really craft a fine piece! This is so romantic & warm. I love it from start to finish! Looks like a trophy winner to me!


  • The Poetic Angel
    July 23, 2008

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    butiful mum

    rememberd snippets of sparklinig waters wash across two hearts

    a butiful expression

    xxx judie xxx

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