I am the man misaligned to free verse right aligned,
Left compression? Forget the communists I mind.
Designed by the supreme energy sensual in sight
Reservation is no freedom shudders my soul sit tight.
Yonder cries my beauty right and you wish a lore?
Be gone vanish you are banished from this floor
Look to the contest, Competition praise their score
Hypnotized sleep: commence your dream you snore
Awaken O! Beauty my magic spell strips her soul again
In hale my essence in body passion caressed by the tongue
Quiver at the touch like a fish as I flick bite her body clash
Grasp lash the junctures, tickle rap those edge vultures.
Sip touch me for I am her bubbling naked wine
Rubbing crushing moaning bodies; no decline
Spread- eagled states her positions nudging tide
Let me through bush whacked knees for I stride
Is this the take she feel the rake of my slides
Crush grinding tender moulds. tips hardened sides
Attacking those thrusts, the wild rears of her butts
Author notes
critical analysis required.
ADULT CONTENT.
A contest entry
- Summer Sizzler...Men Only by Dalaney.
1300 points, ended August 14, 2008, 19 entries
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Comments
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Thank you for your sensually powered submittal, good luck in my contest, Josie
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"Savages loosen her body" - nice...
this is quite well done & creative, a unique poem & voice. An enjoyable read...
I would, however, end the poem at /the rain spike/..lol.
thanks so much for entering the contest..
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You right rhyme with so much soul.
I am reminded of dirty chemicals, the love of legs twisting into piles, kisses that smooth off onto the lips, hard and begging. Erotica like this is always extremely vocal to me. A part of my bones just wants to stay behind and relish the words, take in the metaphors wrapped with gusto. Reminds me of some of Poe's work, how he spoke with conviction in all things. Lovely work.
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Hello apples.
You must hate me for this work.
But forgive me "do in Rome as Rome does'.
Sorry Shall try to avoid this madness.
I am surprised I get extremely high ratings on this poem elsewhere. -
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Like I could ever hate you or your work.
You jest. I think your madness is perfectly sane.
I'm not surprised you've gotten high ratings.
It's a good and thoughtful poem.
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