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Never Drunk

Something you once told me
Never lying
Heard it once long ago
Good advice
I liked it

Drink in hand
Watching everyone fall
Call me the champ
Call me immortal
The drink pourer if you will

Everyone on the floor
Drunken dead
Walk past sleeping bodies
This place is weak
A smile upon my lips
Remembering what you said
Placing my cup down
And out the door

"Don't drink at a cult meeting"

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  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    July 23, 2008
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    great

    I enjoyed reading your poem thank you, Boog


  • Loki silver member
    July 23, 2008
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    always remember, never cut in the kool aid line.

    nice write, good luck.