Dedicated to all Sunset Sea Surfers!
Under the orange sunset sky,
The ready to go surfer rests from a fly...
A fly over the cresting waves no more,
On the now still and serene sunset shore.
I want to go back in to surf again,
Wisftully ponders the surfer sitting in vain.
The sandy shore line now so still,
Inactive pier yonder in the sunset brill!
Warming red and orange tones so bright,
Shine so deeply with warming radiant light.
Romantic sunsets warm the heart,
Yet the lone surfer sits apart....
Apart from a lover nowhere to be seen,
Under this majestic warming sunset so richly seen!
Copyright:K:July 2008
Author notes
Contest Entry:
Contest PIF Quickie Prompt Contest by The Painting Poet
Photo/prompt 1 used.
Limit of 10 - 15 lines
Photo depicts:
A surder sitting on the sand of a sunset shore line
resting their arm on the surf board.
Sea is still and serene, there is a pier in the distance
silhoueted by the darkening rich red and orange sunset
sky and the shore is a dark sand colour clean and serene
and very vibrant and warming sky too.
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A contest entry
- PIF Quickie Prompt Contest by Ceridwens Soul.
525 points, ended July 24, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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A well done piece my friend.
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Beautifully written
Another really good write, full of rich imagery depicting a beautiful day of surfing that has passed him by. His love has run its course and all he can do is wait for another day, keep up the good work, Boog
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Thanks millions!
Thanks millions, for your fab and kind review you are very
inspiring and encouraging.
Glad you liked it.
Best of luck in all of your contests, hope you win Gold in
them all.
Poetic Hugs and Thanks Millions,
Kaz.
Kazytc XX
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Amazing imagery portayed here. Beautiful write, love how you gave the peson in the pic a little bit of life, smoothly done. Thanks for entering and good luck
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congratulations! nicely penned entry!
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Thanks Millions!
Thanks for your lovely comment, and congratulations on your wondeeful well penend works too!
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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This poem uses the image to the maximum as a setting. I am not a surfer but I feel I have been giving a sense of what it is to be one here waiting for that next wave. Well done.
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Thanks Millions!
Thanks for your lovely kind comment and I am so glad you liked my poem.
Your work is excellent too.
Poetic Thanks & Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc XX
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Thank you for your entry, good luck!
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Thanks Millions!
Thank you so much for your kind comment, and for awarding me the bronze that was my first ever trophy, I am so chuffed!
It was an honour to compete and enter your wonderful competition.
Your work is excellent too.
Poetic Thanks & Hugs,
Kaz.
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Thanks very Much!
Thanks for your kind message it is a great honour to enter your wonderful competition.
You are so kind. Hope it all goes well for you and good luck with everything!
Poetic Hugs,
Kaz.
Kazytc xx
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