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Death Warmed Up

Like death
warmed up
This image
looking
back at me
through the
dusty
old mirror
Blood shot eyes
and a
three day growth
I feel lousy
and probably
stink
Tried to drown
your memory
but only made
it worse
What a mess
overflowing ashtray
and some
leftover wine
Damn You

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  • Luna Tique Fringe
    July 29, 2008
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    Can't say why, but this gave me chuckle...thanks