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Drum beat

I marched alone
to the beat of the drum
which only I heard,
until I found you by my side,
listening to the gentle tapping
which only you could hear.

Now we march
alongside each other,
hand in hand;
sometimes to your beat,
sometimes to mine;
but always together.

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Prompt:
"the exhilitarating poignant thing of giving your all for someone else"


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  • Avendesora Dreamer
    August 24, 2008

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    AWWWWW!!! sooo sweet, its like rasberry candy and a warm sunny day . Thank you for your entry in my contest!

  • Judith Chandler
    August 5, 2008
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    Simple but nice. Nice thought.


  • ShaShay
    August 5, 2008
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    Very well done. It has a good feel. Good luck in the contest.Pen on...~Poo~