Nothing

I was a
~butterfly~
alive and
free

but
I
-suddenly-

            f
                e
                    l
                       l

flashes of

red

clouded

vision

I
am
now...
nothing

silence

echoes....

feeling alone and

chilled to the bone
you call my

name

over and over

again

tears fall

down

your voice

echoes

inside you don't

feel

anything

your emotions

stop

you

become

n o t h i n g

Author notes

I used both choices.

THE PAIN by XxemohatexX. 600 points, ended July 23, 2008, 3 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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SoulForSale
July 26, 2008
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kewlness
I loved every single one of youre poems so far
whispernthedark
July 23, 2008

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Congratulations on the bronze, it is visually stunning and a great write.

♥
whisper
Cat
July 23, 2008
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i am impressed with your creativity here- you put so much effort into your layout.. wow..
Luckintheshadows
July 23, 2008

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oh my goodness! this is superb I love the feeling this poem gives, your layout is fantastic. congrats on the bronze, and thanks for sharing this,

Luck.
XxemohatexX
July 23, 2008
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wow i realy like this poem thanks 4 entering i like how you cohse to use 2 picks
Carolina Moon
July 23, 2008
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Powerful and beautifully written. I wish you all the luck in the contest
x-Black-Butterfly-x
July 23, 2008

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so powerfully writte, I could feel every word and understand it, cold even relate to it. such power and emotion
Lady Australis
July 23, 2008
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wow!
this is amazeing sweety
love you