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Branded

 

Oh say can you see the
scars from past history,
you so cleverly
ask me
to conceal?
“It’s the past… get past it.”
But you forget, that
I’ve been branded
and every time I look in the mirror,
or see my face in the news,
or my application is refused because of my color,
I’m reminded.
You criticize me for not taking hold of my destiny
But you’re the one who signed it,
“no entry”
and maybe that was over 300 years ago
but what exactly is the time limit
on a sold soul?
Stripes heal,
but brands remain.
and while you claim
you’re no longer playing the game,
the cards are still on the table;
my chips are still raised;
and the rules remain the same;

I’m branded…
like so much claimed property
And as if that’s not enough,
I’m reminded by the limited future
provided to my children
under a society that would just as soon
have nothing to do with them.

By the dawn’s early light
one more bright leader is
brought down.
You used to use bullets,
now inferior social thinking,
does what guns alone
could never achieve;
the stripping of esteems
and the belief that dreams
are best left in beds and poetry.

You see…

I’m branded and
deeply scarred for
easy identification
and mind blowing
manipulation
to keep your cattle in order.
Those that resist are enslaved
or slaughtered
especially since
our value,
has diminished drastically.
You’ve got a new form of cheap labor
overseas
and you really have no need
for me
anymore.
But you don’t
quite know what to do with me because
I’ve been branded.

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  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    September 1, 2008

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    Excellent. If you don't have to live it you can never truly know it. Congratulations on the gold trophy in this contest. Well done! ~Pamela


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 1, 2008
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  • poetryality silver member
    September 1, 2008
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    "You criticize me for not taking hold of my destiny
    But you're the one who signed it,
    "no entry";
    and maybe that was over 300 years ago
    but what exactly is the time limit
    on a sold soul?"


    Your poem is masterfully written, steeped with truth, and simmered in questions that demand answers. This is the epitome of "spoken word poetry". Damn! I would love to hear you recite this work.

    "Stripes heal,
    but brands remain."


    Your words remind me of 'Beah Richards' as she addressed a covention in Chicago in 1951, filled with an audience of white women only. She appropriately said;

    "You were afraid to nurse your young
    lest fallen breast offend your master's sight
    and he should flee to firmer loveliness.
    And so you passed them, your children, on to me.
    Flesh that was your flesh and blood that was your blood
    drank the sustenance of life from me.
    And as I gave suckle I knew I nursed my own child's enemy.
    I could have lied,
    told you your child was fed till it was dead of hunger.
    But I could not find the heart to kill orphaned innocence.
    For as it fed, it smiled and burped and gurgled with content
    and as for color knew no difference.
    Yes, in that first while
    I kept your sons and daughters alive."


    Exquisite work dear brother! Thank you for this entry and I wish you the best in the contest as well as in life.

    I have performed excerpts of her work and feel the same as I did then while reading your poem. I absolutely loved this penning! I know I commented before but the power of the pen evokes different images at different times in life.

    Always ♥

    Renee


  • Oraculus
    July 30, 2008
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    Awesome...................

    This is very deep and divides asunder... Magnificent poetry, John: you continue to amaze me... DW

  • poetryality silver member
    July 28, 2008

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    "You used to use bullets,
    now inferior social thinking,
    does what guns alone
    could never achieve;
    the stripping of esteems
    and the belief that dreams
    are best left in beds and poetry."


    Speak dear brother SPEAK!

    We still suffer
    from those internal scars
    that never scabbed over.

    Those injuries
    are still inflamed;
    sores.

    As we fester,
    and puss over,
    a bitter stain--
    nastily spilt
    into the bloodstream
    of futre generations...

    Let's get at the truth, why don't WE!?

    Powerful! TRUTH!



    Always ♥

    Renee

  • Yvette Champ gold member
    July 24, 2008

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    Thought provoking, emotive, powerful and poignant dear Poet, I hear you loud and clear. I like the way you interlace Old Glory and show the shape of being branded historically and with brutality.
    Education and validation is needed for today's souls as much as it was needed for yesterdays. Well said.

  • Sign of the Swine
    July 24, 2008
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    I believe I've read this five times already.

    You speak the truth.


  • secberm
    July 23, 2008

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    At first it was shackles and chains
    and changing our names that branded us
    like a "Lazy N" on a cow's behind
    (You know a "Z" meant we were sleeping).
    Now were branded with Prada and Dolce
    as slaves to fashion on concrete streets.
    O, we've come long way from not reading
    to not wanting to read and being whipped
    to chuck and jive for potential buyers
    (soul traders wanted "souls" to "look" happy)
    to chucking and jiving BECAUSE we're buying!
    Buying into our own slavery that is!

    Write on, bro. LOVED it from the start. One.

    Dez


  • just mercedes gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    This is very powerful, even more so for the restraint of the poet's voice, and the deep conviction with which he speaks.

    I can only imagine how it must feel, to be faced every day, in every way, with discrimination. I have lived with a lesser form, as a woman, and I know how it bugs me - so I can identify with these words, although not nearly to the same extent.

    I like the way your opening words sound the bells and whistles of patriotism. I can't imagine how it would feel, to love your country, and not be loved in return. Hopefully, changes in America will see changes to these inhuman attitudes - but Katrina was very recent, and that was a powerful lesson to those of us overseas, who looked on in disbelief.

    What can I say? Keep the faith. The world is changing.


  • arafura gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    "You’ve got a new form of cheap labor
    overseas
    and you really have no need
    for me
    anymore.
    But you don’t know quite what to do with me because
    I’ve been branded."

    This blew me away John. I love the raw power of your voice and your convictions. Shine on poet!


  • Maryann22
    July 23, 2008

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    wow this is so very beautiful, although very sad. i could picture everything you were talking about. you have a great way with words.

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