Salted satin sensuality,
Gently drips from scented skin,
Fingers touch, electric teases,
As we bathe in each others lust,
Sexual seductive stares,
Exchanging passions desire,
Set afire from seasoned want,
Born to life from nervous touch,
Sinful salacious saturation,
Consuming intensity engulfs us,
All else has evanesced,
Two bodies now mesh as one,
Scintillating strokes subdue,
Euphoric tremors arise,
Heat flooding through us,
Now flesh penetrates flesh,
Searching sweet sighs,
Escape from pleasured lips,
My hands explore your body,
Caressing gently trembling curves,
Sublime summit of sensitivity,
A climax is at its crest,
One lasting thrust, the embrace intense,
An intimate stare, the perfume of love...
Author notes
Been a long time between writes...
Hope I got it right...
A contest entry
- Summer Sizzler...Men Only by Dalaney.
1300 points, ended August 14, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like how an intimate stare is the perfume of love..
thanks so much for this entry
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this poem was pretty cool and deep hope you do some more
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Beautiful
I liked the beauty of this poem. The way you described sex was not only erotic, but beautiful. Sex can be the most beautiful thing on earth. -
I think you got it right. This is a sensual write with all the elements of lust involved in its' words. Beautiful feel to this write. Pen on...
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oooh i got chills!!!
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This is truly sensuality described and experienced. The play of words and alliteration/assonance is inviting and alluring. I love the last line, the classy touch.
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This poem is very wonderful. I really like how this poem slowly heated up through out the reading of it..
The last line really brings this whole poem together.. though the line before that is very sensual and heated like the rest of this piece..I really enjoyed this.. Best of luck.. It's gold in my eyes..
Angel
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Well done...Max
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Fingers touch, electric teases,As we bathe in each others lust,My hands explore your body,Caressing gently trembling curves,Sublime summit of sensitivity,A climax is at its crest,
One lasting thrust, the embrace intense,
An intimate stare, the perfume of love...wow a beautiful sensual poem full of erotica and very hot good luck in the contest
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