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Faking Pointless Games

Who's to blame when you play your games
To every one else it's not quite that simple
Know this my friend you will not win
If you keep faking your true feelings
Your nothing but a poser and your
Soul has gone completely to hell
Will you choose to live on the brink or
Fade off into the distance
At the cost of those few invested in
All of your pointless games

Author notes

Inspired By Seether's Fake It.

29. Fake It by Seether Option 3
Who's to know if your soul will fade at all is what i used for the line from the song....
Check it out i fixed it sorry about that

Fake It Seether

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Comments

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  • Deformed Duck
    September 8, 2008

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    This was a short poem and that makes me so relieved! It's Awsome and I know that song! I can see how you could come up with this! Good Luck and thatnks for entering!


  • AutumnGypsy gold member
    August 28, 2008

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    This has a true feeling of pissed off to it lol, it was a well written piece, well done on your gold. Best to you


  • sleepingINblackRain
    August 14, 2008
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    This is wonderful, it's laced with anger, and the words fit so well together. You get a point across, i like that. I also greatly admire the fact that i can tell what the inspiration was for this, before i read the authors comment box. wonderful job, thanks for entering and good luck in my contest


  • Mistress Masquerade
    August 11, 2008
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    Fake It is one of my favorite songs by Seether and this was a great take on the option. I loved the emotion and thought here. Good luck.


  • disgrace
    August 8, 2008
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    i like it


  • Note The Sarcasm
    July 23, 2008
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    I'm glad to see someone chose this option. And I liked it, too. And, just a question, in line 2, could you have possibly left out a word or part of a word? Because it doesn't seem to quite make sense to me. "To every else it's not that smiple". I don't know. It just doesn't sound complete. Great write, though!

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