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Heart

Curvy lips,
and crooked smiles,
turn the world upside-down.

Shining eyes,
and muscle for miles,
flip-flop stomachs in every town.

But unless that muscle beats for me,
let the town flip-

I'll save my key.



Author notes

Metaphorical key, not the physical kind.

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  • paulcreates silver member
    July 23, 2008

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    Oh MY! This is a very efficient use of words dear poet. You even repeated "muscle" and "flip" to a very fine advantage indeed. Truly enjoyed every word here.
    Thank you for entering.
    Paul


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    July 23, 2008

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    Yes indeed. I like this very much. ~Pamela


  • blackfang4318 gold member
    July 23, 2008
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    good work

    nice pome i love it