Blanketed by warmth of love,
the missing piece of my heart;
words spoken through your golden eyes,
deeply caresses my soul.
A glimpse of romance
awakening the vestibules of my life.
A treasure to be found;
like poetry in motion,
sharing a journey
upon a passageway to love.
Author notes
PROMPT:
women poets only: I don't just need a man, I need love.
50 words
A contest entry
- Women poets only - I don't just need a man, I need love. by paulcreates.
600 points, ended August 5, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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"awakening the vestibules of my life." Nicely put.
thank you for entering the contest.
Paul -
This is just beautiful dear! Your words paint a hopeful sense of longing, for simplicity - devotion, and love felt everlasting. Very nice! Best wishes in the contest!
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This is a beautiful piece of poetry
And it truly flows with love in wonderful form
Best of wishes to you.
Tony
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