The next full moon I’ll come to
you, and you must set her free.
I tell you this with a warning,
handed down from the Marquis.
Our gentle warrior with her blade,
will rein down with all her might.
The carnage left will show you fear,
most won’t live through the night.
She is the protector of our people’s
lives, her father was our last king.
Denote the markings above her left
arm, and in her hair the rings.
Make no mistake she comes to you,
as a sign from our great passed.
If you don’t comply with her
demands, your kingdom will not last.
Her mournful look is what you should
fear, she’s seen the battle fought.
She knows the future, it speaks to her,
from a child she has been taught.
Do you see her allies flying high,
they've have come to aid her cause.
I’m sure your fear of them should be,
enough to set your hoards to pause.
She is ready now and your time is up,
her tears have almost come to flow.
Once her tear drops have hit the sand,
you will see more terror than you know.
It’s over now her task has through, she
will return having done what’s right.
Your armies gone your kingdoms in ruins,
you should have never fought this fight.
Author notes
"Others Promise1"
A contest entry
- Picture Prompts by Luckintheshadows.
425 points, ended July 23, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Ooooh, I adore the fantasy of your write, the power of your words, the strength and will, I love I love!!! Your words speak like a prophecy of truth and I think you've done a really excellent job with the prompt! Thanks for sharing this, and taking the time to enter my contest,
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Thank you so much
I really enjoyed writing this piece it was a lot of fun. Thank you for having the contest. I will enter you next one too. Thanks again first gold or anything for that matter
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