I need a man
who wants
me
I need a man
who desires
me
I need a man
who touches
me
only
I need a man
who believes
in me
I need a man
who supports
me
I need a man
who needs
me
I need a man
who loves
me
only
Author notes
supports me in things I do, not so I could lay around and play on the computer all day. Though that would be nice for a month or two.
A contest entry
- Women poets only - I don't just need a man, I need love. by paulcreates.
600 points, ended August 5, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Poet it is also true that many men need such a women. But hell it seems like a fire that burns and then dies. The villian always warms the bed.
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Very short and sweet!
I want a woman. My jealous cat wouldn't. Well I am just kidding. Nice write! OOCH! My cat just clawed me.
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You have to be careful of those jealous cats, I know I dated a guy once you had one.
Thank you for your comment and taking the time to read my poem. Though personally it is not one of my favorites, but it is some of what I want in a man.
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Very simple and very direct. This is written in man language.
Thank you for entering this contest.
Paul -
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a man asked for it, lol
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