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Embraced

The embrace of
a captive heart
leaving a tender
soul holding
the keys
to an angel-

A kiss of
whispers leaving
a love for a
darling beautiful
in sequester
inside a loneliness
lost-

Author notes

word bank using:
Kiss,Embrace,Sequester
Captive,Heart,Soul
Darling,Love,Whispers
Tender,Beautiful,Angel

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  • Disturbed Prodigy
    July 25, 2008

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    knocked me on my butt i tell you that. this is a beautiful poem that you have written here, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest

  • Poetryintheblood gold member
    July 23, 2008
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    Thank you for your lovely entry, good luck in my contest, Josie