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Perfection

Pleasing to those
Eyes around us,
Rather we think it wrong or,
Formost right.
Every single time i see it i
Can't ever believe what i see...
That most people think...
It's only the best thing to do,
Only to be perfect to get attention...
Not... remember... perfection is just a word

Author notes

hmmm... im not sure if i spelled that right. lol.. i tried!

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  • Darkwell
    July 25, 2008

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    yah you spelled it good LOL

    Only God is perfect and this is a great penning about how nobody is even though alot of us try to be all the time.

    Wow
    That was
    Gripping


    WTG! Good luck in the contest