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Monkey

Well lock me tight Inside a cage
I'll beat the bars In fits of rage
the monkey do what monkey see
so make a monkey out of me

Then make me dance for me desire
and light my dreams with your white fire
the monkey do what monkey see
so make a monkey out of me

I've heard white lines will fade away
and comes again the brighter day
well monkey do what monkey see
so make a monkey out of me

don't laugh at me don't look away
don't mock a man that's led astray
cause monkey see what monkey do
I'll make a monkey out of you...

Author notes

Written for a contest. Is it disqualifying that I'm in an awesome mood though write a grumpy poem? Ah well, place on it what you will, sorta got the idea from the phrase "monkey on your back" and inspired by line one in the poetry contest selection "Don't laugh at me, don't look away"...

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    August 2, 2008

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    Hmmm, don't take advice from a man in difficulties and an angry man holds no bounds, goes well with the mood of this poem! Anger, but isn't it good to let it all out!!!


  • Era Umbra
    July 22, 2008
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    ha ha ha

    Nice twist/play on words! I liked your poem! GREAT WRITE!!!!