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Nursery Rhymes

If my life was like
a limerick
a Nursery Rhyme
It would be, "The Dish Ran Away With the Spoon".
Because I am waiting for the cow
to finally jump over the moon
So all the night sky stars
can get lost in the twinkle of my lovers blue grey green eyes.

Author notes

short, sweet, and too the point.

Any advice would be lovely?

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  • AndTheGuitarWeeps
    July 23, 2008
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    loved it b another great write


  • exithere
    July 22, 2008
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    very very nice. i LOVE these types of poems. bianca you're like rly good!