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Intoxication




May I have lilacs on Monday,
please?

If I could have tulips on
Tuesday, I'd be quite happy

With Moonlight Primroses
fragrant Wednesday

Thursday, carefree nasturtiums;
oui, a wish for thyme on Friday

Saturday, delphiniums, elegant

Everlasting love,
all day, Sunday.



Author notes

"Flowers really do intoxicate me."
- Vita Sackville-West

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  • Lowell Poe
    August 28
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    First I love the poem on your page lass,
    about the nose....really gave me a laugh.
    This was first rate enjoyable.
    I always thought the interesting thing about flowers were the are so fleeting.
    Why the represent our feelings when they last for such a short period always perplexed me...maybe because it's so easy to fall in love.
    The end was pure and sweet..
    Just made me feel nice.
    Great job.

    Many blessings gypsy,
    LOWELL


  • drbauser
    July 29
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    i think this is a plain and straight good write. i really enjoyed it.
  • "If I could have tulips on Tuesday, I'd be quite happy" i loved that part the poem was very well written with much emotion.