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Society's Sociology

I take out my pen and my paper
Because all the haters and the fakers
Try to claim I'm not the real deal
I don't idolizes the people
Who be flashin' & the scheming
Because the materialized world we live in
Is just the expectations of the system
& the failing side of the statistics
The children & their bitichin'
& eventually that lies between the messed up
and the fucked up

You see society's sociology
Is that we must kill to make a dollar
Grind to be a diamond
And degrade ourselves to be seen
Because it does not matter where you come from
And the color of your skin
Chances are you know someone
Who plays in these role models too

Shit, it just might be you.

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I was at work

Any advice would be lovely?

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  • Mozarts funeral gold member
    July 25, 2008

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    You at work but you know you're still a star!!! and I'm glad there are more people that have noticed you're wise beyond your years!!! keep it flowin' B

    Always

    Zita Ray


  • Bosiarbooger gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    Very well done

    On this one you don't need advice just tell it like it is. You write much older than your years. Thank you for the read. (big sigh) Boog


    • bloved
      July 24, 2008
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      Thank you so much for your lovely comment!

      I have always thought that I have an old soul, but with a modern twist.


  • blackchild3303
    July 22, 2008
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    I really liked this. It has a lot truth behind it.