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Sweet Surrender

Your birthdays come with brilliant gladness,
for I am blessed by your sweet love.
All the world is filled with joy
and angels' songs to light your day.

May every year bring God's best blessings
to you, my wife, whose lovely ways
make every day a vast great garden
of rare and happy mysteries.

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A bright and glorious birthday to the beautiful poet, "reflections."

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  • individuality gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    a good poem penned, birthdays wash us with gentle smiles and lift us to the brand new day where laughter dances in the heart.


  • Sabir Abdus Samee
    July 23, 2008

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    Thank you for writing a sweet birthday poem for my wife Hafsa Bintey Faruq.
    best wishes,
    Sabir Abdus Samee