Flowers on my pillow
dandelion love
a gourmet meal?...
a favorite candy bar.
Kisses on my forehead,
smiles from up above,
love that's real...
anywhere you are.
Laughter's happy feeling
in each day's surprise.
Yes, I know you love me.
I can see it in your eyes.
A contest entry
- What's the Sweetist Thing Anyone Has Ever Done For You Love? by Immortalbeauty.
1000 points, ended August 7, 2008, 11 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Smile... all the while...
Comments
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awe, i really like the last two lines- its so true, and thats the only way to describe it really and know. good luck in the contest
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a good piece of poetry, a light and smiling poem that whips up a frenzy of love and bakes it in memory's oven.
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One of the most entertaining comments I've ever read!
Thank you, kind Sir. 
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Awww this is real sweet Gives you your favorite flower and candy too Goodluck in the contest best wishes and much love
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