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the Town That Never Sleeps

The sun dosen't wake the city,

  She never went to sleep.

The day just moves along,

  With her people at her heels.

 

As time moves on another shift comes in,

  They just step into place.

One set going home,

  While the other now in the rat race.

 

Evening shadows begin to hover,

  Street lights try to recover.

Fear still lurks both day and night.

  Crime gives life a sneer.

 

At last the town is black and white.

  The city puts on her lovely show.

From the lights there is a golden glow.

  He beauty is reflected as the water only knows.

 

  7-22-2008

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  • mcheadle
    July 24
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    I may not have made it big

    But at least I was on the page, maybe at the bottem but somebody had to hold the other us. Dumb me I thought it was pretty - pretty enough to want to go and see her again...mac
  • nice work..good description

    thank you for the entry
  • Bravo, Mac

    Very nicely written. The City that never sleeps. Good luck in the contest.