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Trash (working title)

Bleeding for a voice
feels like we don't have a choice
'conform or die motherfucker'
seems to be what we hear
seems to be what we wear
what the hell?
can't we feel?
can't we scream?
God fuck it if we dream
count it down, here we go....

Tear it up
bring it down
mosh this place straight to hell
paint a finger on the wall
tell em all where to go
stand up
get a voice
light a fire along the way
hell yeah now lets go

(bring in Blackchild)
The words coming out our mouths are considered leathal
The verses are so raw it should be illegal
We soar, we fly higher than any american eagle
Were so misunderstood by so many people

Bleeding, pheining for a voice not yet too be found
But for now we just bark like wild blood hungry hounds
On the door of the norm we continue to pound
We beat it to the dirt until it decays in the ground

We devour society just like it tried to do us
Shut them up, raising hell is a must
In the power of our voices we trust
We spark revolutionary minds with one touch

One word,one stanza that last
One song, one poem should do the task
And go ahead society have your laughs
And all that political bullshit put it up your ass

(Bring in Jaydin)
Break, break, break it down. So you think it's a must, just put it up attack us with this bullshit you say 'In God We Trust' well back it up, or we'll break it down. Tear down those walls fill up these streets answer us motherfucker or are you too damn weak?

Author notes

The first of (hopefully) many collaborations. Written for the Punk band 'Cuss Like Christians'

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  • JinSays gold member
    July 25

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    Back it up, or break it down. I agree. Too bad not many can do this, this world would be so much better. No, I loved this. There is definitely anger, but most rightfully so. Feign. That's it. Expressive, and yeah I'm feelin ya. I'm right behind this one. I can hear Rage singing it. Most excellent.

    Always,
    Jin

    . Rewarded 6


    • JaydinC
      July 25
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      Ah yeah!

      Hell yeah, I was actually listening to RATM 'Fist Full O' Steel' when I wrote my part of this song. So you were right on it there. Cool

  • rollingzen
    July 25
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    well done
    sorry I ran of of points to give you
  • wow this is really good!!! i cant wait to read more sonds and stuff like this!


  • darell
    July 25

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    Wow!

    Lets just say you certainly had a voice
    in this piece. I love the passion and drama
    you brought in your poem. Its so true we need
    to be heard by any means necessary. I applaud
    you and your collaborator. Keep spitting out
    wisdom and knowledge to the masses.

    . Rewarded 6

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