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I can’t take back the things I’ve said

I know I can't take back the things I’ve said
Even though at times I wish I could
I can’t take back the hurt they’ve caused
And sorry can only do so much
I can ask for forgiveness
Yet the words are already spoken
And they linger in the back of one’s mind
I can’t take back the things I’ve said
And sorry don’t cut it all the time
I wish I could take it all back
But since I can’t this is the best I can do
I’m sorry,
Please forgive me
And last but no where near least
I love you
More than the world can tell

Do you think he'll listen?

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  • bluecollarlove
    September 8
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    Makes me think of all the things I wish I could take back.My worst trait is my bad mouth.


  • Zixaphir
    October 29, 2008

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    Full of sorrow. I can only wonder what it is you said that you'd regret so much. I hope you'll find the forgiveness you're looking for and wish you the best.

  • drakkanlord
    August 6, 2008
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    good

    anither one done good


  • Silvos. silver member
    August 5, 2008

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    This is very heartfelt and emotional. I hope whoever you wrote this can forgive the past, it's the higher road on any given occasion. Well written fellow poet. Keep that pen at work.

    Silvos.


  • KatherineAnne
    August 5, 2008

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    Wow. I love this! It explains the struggle of saying sorry when you realize that sometimes it makes things worse.. Or just doesn't help at all.. Great write (:

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