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birthday roses

roses at your feet
birthday's love is blossoming
your smile lights my day

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Happy birthday to beautiful "Reflection."

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  • individuality gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    a good piece - the petals of love flutter in celebration's wind and smiles gather at the heart while the spirit slips past the skin and sails wonder.


  • Sabir Abdus Samee
    July 23, 2008
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    Very Sweet

    Thank you for writing a sweet birthday poem for my wife Hafsa Bintey Faruq.

  • King30Nido
    July 23, 2008
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    This is a good poem.

  • King30Nido
    July 23, 2008
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    This is a good poem.


  • Periwinkle Blue
    July 22, 2008

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    A birthday contest!

    I love your sweet message. Perfectly penned with love's beautiful garden blossoming.

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