All you have done has
Brought tears to my eyes.
Crawling all over me your
Decietful words have no remorse.
Every love has to sting
For my heart to mend.
Give me something,
Haven't you hurt me enough?
I see your words cut through me,
Justifiying my anguish inside.
Knotting my feelings together and
Loathing my willingness to give.
My thoughts are of your heart
Never letting me inside.
Open your heart and let me
Pierce it with my love.
Questioning your motives has
Raped me of my sanity.
Stop abusing my soul or I'll
Taunt you just as you have me.
Unrequited love gives nothing, but
Various forms of sorrow.
Why can't you find the adoration in me as
X marks the spot where it lies.
You will always be loved by me 100 times more, but
Zero is the number of love you have for me.
Author notes
I actually wrote an abc poem about 4 yrs ago, but sense there are no prewrites i decided to write a new one because i love the poem. I dont know if this is really good, but i tried a different technique.
A contest entry
- ABC poems only by BuffSMGfan3.
300 points, ended July 26, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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congratulations! A well deserved win! On a side note, The letter X is a real pain in the A for this S.
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Great ABC poem for sure! I like this poem a lot. My favorite line was:
"Every love has to sting"
It made me think of the phrases, "Why pluck a weed, when you already have a rose?" but then again "Every rose has it's thorn"
Great write!
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Very good, especially for an ABC poem. I have isses following forms, but this is wonderful. Best of luck!
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Ok sense you are the first entry i would like to let u know so far u are winning lol. But yes this poem is exactly what i wanted beautiful write. I loved it.
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