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Torn

Missing image
Drowning within the wanton sins of flesh
a heart bound to faith.
A Soul torn asunder
by desires of flesh and heart.

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Pic prompt-found on google-artist unknown

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  • Carolina Moon gold member
    July 22, 2008
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    A great refreshing read..alot said in so few words..thank you for your wonderful entry!


  • Wandering Woodchuck silver member
    July 22, 2008

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    Now this is a good poem. It is short, sweet, and goes with the prompt without bashing religion.

    Nicely written.

    Mike


    • Rclane gold member
      July 22, 2008
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      Thank you so much for your time in reading and words of encouragement.