To Skinny-dip
is to canoodle the lips of Being,
slowly strips the masks
you hide your heart behind,
is how you find
your soul’s true song
and sing it gracefully
in rain cloud Nirvana sea.
To Skinny-dip is to Be
as to perceive is to see.
To Skinny-dip is to Breath
the essence of stars
counting on Mars
to grant your wishes.
To Skinny-dip is to Live
as the water you surround yourself in,
where you’ve found out
about how to begin
Becoming the you
you always knew you knew
how to Be in the first place.
To Skinny-dip is to Be
the simply spoken verse of our own life
whether in happiness or strife
we are we, you are you
but you already knew this,
so blow a kiss
to your own Being.
To Skinny-dip is to believe
you are what you want to achieve,
to be naked to the Truth
that to Skinny-dip is to Be
the Truth itself.
Comments
-
this is a nice write about a random subject
I don't understand the capitalization of random words though.
also, I love this part-
To Skinny-dip is to Breath
the essence of stars
counting on Mars
to grant your wishes.
- but "Breath" should be "Breathe" -
Some very evocative and detailed imagery here really help to portray a definite sense of place and time. Like the refrain that opens each stanza and the way you use the senses to communicate the feelings of the poetic voice regarding the subject matter. I also really liked the sense of freedom and self belief going on here, interesting subject. Thanks for sharing an original and imaginative write. Cheers.
-
Excellent write
I find this a delightful and well written piece. Good show, Wallace!
I am thoroughly ignorant of this 'applaud system. Obviously I'd have given you more points, but alas, I have no more to give
Adding your comment:
