Suffocation from desire,
Drowning from conviction,
Bound by religion,
To die without living.
Ideations to halt decision,
Cerebration to pass sin,
A sea of disciples,
Deceased with eyes shut.
Salvation circles repetition,
Freedom of thought lingers,
Live your own life,
Wander free from crucifying bane.
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Picture Credit: Unknown
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A contest entry
- Dark Pic Prompt by Carolina Moon.
450 points, ended July 23, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Such a smooth flowing piece of intensity here. Very well penned indeed! An intense presence defined within these lines, relating well to the image inspiration - but so far beyond. Nicely done!
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I could not agree with you more, yet without relgion where would we truely be.......? Food for thought, and a powerful and deeply dark write.
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You know my outlook, the link to this contest just happened to be there, I clicked it, saw the picture and this is what came out without thought. Good times
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Great write, thank you so much for your entry!
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Thank you for the comment
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Wow!!! Absolutely Amazing!!! This is mighty powerful, my friend! I feel you here, and this really touches me! Beautifully written!!!
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Some people feed off religion, others dont. I have my beliefs but this what the picture brought to words. Thank you for the nice comment.
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