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[Purgatory]

Oh Lord, forgive me for my sins
I must've lost control again
And with the anger inside me and the gun so close
Could you really blame me for not just letting him go?

He hurt me, I loved him, we went up in flames
Only hurtful words were exchanged
I missed his love, I hated myself
The revenge may have went too far but I kind of like hell

You've bound me to your crucifix
I know I shouldn't complain
But I'm stuck here in purgatory because of your claims
We both know I'm insane so you can let me go
I don't belong here and it's known

Lord, I swear I believe
But I'd rather stay in the depths of hell
Then know you're watching over me

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  • Carolina Moon gold member
    July 22, 2008
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    A unique take on the prompt. Very deep. Thank you for your entry