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Frozen Solitude

wrapped in a blanket of emptiness,
chilled by tears
  escaping a numb heart,

passion resonating;
freely shared
yet
unreturned,

feelings of invisibility
left unwarmed;
frozen to the core

love's kindred melody
breathes life
yet
asphyxiated

embraced by the coldness of hope
peace; bleak exhaustion
destined for loneliness


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  • unsigned gold member
    July 26
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    yip that is pretty cold and lonely...

    well done fantastic read..

    Simon