When you said you’d build a space ship, I thought you were bizarre,
But when I saw your cosmic construction, you became a superstar,
When you said you’d figured out how to travel faster than light,
I definitely had the belief you were a babbling troglodyte,
When you said you planned to take me beyond our furthest planet,
I was sure without a shadow of doubt, your brains were made of granite,
When you said that you had space suits that would protect us from radiation,
I thought you‘d lost your marbles from your years of intoxication,
Till now you have proved me wrong, but the label “imbecile” truly applies,
Tell me, oh incredible genius, where in Hades is the oxygen supply?
A contest entry
- PIF LOOKING FOR HUMOR - PHOTO PROMPT ~#103~ for PIF I won in Penmans contest by Roaddog Wolf.
575 points, ended August 4, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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LMAO this is funny as hell , excuse the pun. Good flow and rhyme, good write, I enjoyed the read allot.
Thanks for your entry and good luck in the contest.
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HAHAHAHA! hahahahahahahahahaha loved it, lol, amazing take on the poetry.
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