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Prince of the Dark ( Gold )

Darkness a Prince,

King of....


 

Written shadows crept to the crypt,

Eerie speculation,

held breathless,

Suspense in animated glaces,

gripping,

Terror in blood,

screaming,

Curdle in boiled spew.

 

13th a lucky number,

as the clock turned.

 

Carnival of colour,

painted canvas of words.

 

House of dolls,

shattering a mind.

 

Old lonely a man,

missing his beloved Maude.

 

Grave side visits,

I sit in the rain watching.

 

Haunted housing,

life ending always open ended questioning.

 

Author....

 

Wayne Leon,

My Brother.

Author notes

Hugs to you and may your dreams come true
I will do just as you asked me to xx Much love xxx

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    July 28, 2008

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    Excellent imagery within this piece--very well versed--Good luck in the contest!

  • Francis Vincent
    July 24, 2008

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    very good

    13th a lucky number,
    as the clock turned

    so imaginative to portray a clock with the number 13 and luck
    as there are only 12 numbers on a clock
    that is, like, the coolest line i've read in a while


  • maralisa silver member
    July 23, 2008

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    I agree all fantastic poem by the prince of darkness who will be missed by so many Terror in blood,screaming,Curdle in boiled spew.House of dolls,shattering a mind.Old lonely a man,missing his beloved Maude.Grave side visits,I sit in the rain watching.good luck in the contest my friend take carerose*maralisa


  • daviscth silver member
    July 22, 2008

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    Reading this is like losing him all over again....
    He's one heck of a person as well as an accomplished author. Thank you for posting this.


    • Reptile Lady gold member
      August 6, 2008
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      my pleasure to honor this great Man
      and thank you for the Gold x


  • storiesuntold gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    This was awesome and yes we shall miss him more than he realizes

    Its always hard to lose a friend here on AP for they are true friends indeed . I dont know if I will ever get use to this


  • luna-midnight gold member
    July 22, 2008

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    *sigh* a lovely write..but truly i cant say much
    but good luck in the contest and take care
    Stephanie ♥

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