Ripped dresses spilled a soft scent of secret
Gravity pulling nipples into daylight and eager hands
Senses splitting sex juice and wet lips
And fumbling fingertips;
Arrested cock up, as a bra strap slipped off
As the eager eyes indulge in curves and cunt
Lapping it up
Teasing the tit tips until back arched
She slips a shifty hand and pays up
He responds and raises to her clever lips.
Deep thrusts delivered in thumps and pants
Flipping the ass over and grab with both hands
Slap a little encouragement in
On all fours bucking back, your hanging in
FAster messier roughly fondling
Rubbing harder
reaching the right signs
feeling her shaking
And spewing over tanned thighs.
A contest entry
- erotic war by diabeticboy.
900 points, ended July 24, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Comments
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I like it. Good description mixed with action.
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amazing i loved it keep it up thanks for entering and good luck
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