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Waking Up

Having walked a mile
          with no shoes,
                  my feet bleed and
my mind caves on the words

         that riot against my cerebellum.

The nightmare I have co-existed with
        for the entirety of my life no longer
                           offers me sustenance.

I do not suckle it for sacrifice
to my Muse for poetry
                nor
do I give it credence
for the mistakes I have made.

For her divine wickedness has brought me
      to my knees in reexamination of myself.

And I have found
        a tiny, sparkling dream
              nestled along the glass shards
                              biting into my flesh.

But I had to be taken apart,

laid supine amongst the rubbish,

               and half blind with life


                                  to earn this gem.

I clutch at my ideal and 
          beg for him
             to stay.



Author notes

5)"I see the dream and I see the nightmare, and I believe you can't have the dream without the nightmare."

 

Tori Amos

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  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    August 4, 2008

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    I think that you did a good job with the quote that you have chosen thank you muchly for taking the time to enter my contest be well.


  • Loki silver member
    July 22, 2008

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    I know this quote and I am quite impressed with this poem. Two parts for me to comment on:

    "And I have found
    a tiny, sparkling dream
    nestled along the glass shards
    biting into my flesh."

    I loved the imagery here. A sparkling dream amongst glass shards. Very descriptive as usual.

    "I clutch at my ideal and
    beg for him
    to stay."

    See: Laughing at a Lifetime.