It seemed so truly important
To say just the right words in our vows
We labored over them for nights on end
Finally, they were finished
And spoken without a hitch
Watching the video of the wedding
I realized all that mattered
Was we both said "I Do".
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Thank you for your entry
I see the connection here clearly, all in all wedding vows where just another brick in the foundation of the marriage and the true meaning was in the fact that you both were committed to each other. Nicely done.
I encourage you to keep writing to read and comment.
God Bless
Tammy
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How true it is...when all is said and done the "I DO" is the key to it all...well done in truth and meaning...very creative...
Best to you!
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