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The Kraken's Kiss

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The sea's icy waves

drown her prayers for a miracle,

body growing numb and frozen,

arms aching  being tied during the wait

until her nightmares had teeth.

 

Each fin imagined in the swells

burns fear's iron into her chest,

not sure a death from shark feast

would be worse

that the hell yet to rise from the ocean.

 

Lips sting from taste of saltwater,

mind wavers in lucidity from pain,

slipping into shelter of her visions,

recalling the precious seconds

her soul could float on tangential streams,

so close to the heaven that owned her soul.

 

Moment of regret grabs her throat,

how could she imagine

a simple confession

would be fatal?

 

The fishing village seemed so quaint and friendly,

its denizen, ordinary and simple,

but Sunday brought a shadow to the paradise

when she learned that God was not who they worshipped.

 

Having abounded in hate from visit by cross crusaders

who brought such horror in the name of their Lord.

Finding out too late,

that she would pay the ultimate price for admitting her faith

bound to a spiritual icon serving as her altar,

until the Kraken they serve comes by their call,

and claims the sacrifice with its bloody kiss.

 

 

 


 

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  • Carolina Moon gold member
    July 23, 2008

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    wow, loaded with imagination and very well done I might add. Great write! Thank you for your entry!


  • maralisa silver member
    July 23, 2008

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    body growing numb and frozen,Lips sting from taste of saltwater,mind wavers in lucidity from pain,that she would pay the ultimate price for admitting her faith
    bound to a spiritual icon serving as her altar,until the Kraken they serve comes by their call,and claims the sacrifice with its bloody kiss.wow a very powerful take on the promt full of deep powerful emotions all the way through good luck in the contest