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The Captain's Captive

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“I will return,” her Captain pleaded
as he boarded his long ship

He embraced his heart with tear filled eyes
“I love you,’ he whispered and then goodbye

She wept, “Forever I will wait by the sea
for your touch I will long for eternity.”

She waved farewell as he slipped away
into shadows that the velvet night held

Over vast seas, tossing and churning
his endless nights, for her yearning

They longed for a crest or slope
that would return love’s hope

Years gone and memories never faded
she could stand no more, thinking him bladed

Took herself to the cliffs one last time
muttered this to be her last climb

Looked beyond gray and stormy skies
stepped to her death, her imminent demise

Now you see her among the mist
her sobs rent with the echoing waves

The villagers hear her sorrowful song
each night that the gusts are strong

Still her soul seeks with its hold
for love, this tale will eternally unfold


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  • Reptile Lady gold member
    July 28

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    Haunting and deep
    Your words paint the story from this image
    Thank you for your entry and best wishes to you
    Julie

  • daviscth silver member
    July 25

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    This has such a hauntily and sad feel to it... I can almost feel her sorrow and pain. Thank you for this awesome entry.