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God's Canvas.


As the cool blue heavens slowly turn somber red,the sun sets over a Hawaiin Island, blanketing the sky and ocean in a serene sight of golden hues.

Burnt orange skies are on the rise, you can feel the sensual love in the air,as you listen to the warm feel of love's soft whispers, while standing here upon the sands of this warm tropical land,enjoying the romantic scene of the sunset...

As you gaze up to the heavens,the sky is on fire,a fiery ball of light,the setting of the golden sun.
It glistens on the dark shadows,bequetheing a gift of golden splendor,with amber and auburn hues coloring the sky,as the sleepy sun paints the heavens and sea.

Beneath shadowed palm,lighting up the far horizion,the soft muted sunset,sinks into the sea to extinguish it,and bids farewell,for another day is over,and tomorrow will follow.

Watching as the sun goes down,the velvet night spreads its calm through wispy arms of palm trees at the oceans edge,as the swaying palm fronds wave in a warm gentle on-shore breeze under the peach hued sky.

Such a breathtaking sunset on this tropical isle,as night falls serenly upon the warm earth.

Beauty of this scene where tranquilty is found,portrays real artistic taste,with innate talent...
and on this beautiful island of paradise God is the Master Artist of this tropical sunset.




© 2008 Angel's Whispers (All rights reserved)





Hello Dear Poet,
Thanking you in advance for reading my words and for any comments that you leave.Your time and review is greatly valued and I appreciate your thoughts dearly.
I hope you have enjoyed the read.

Take care and many blessings to you.
Your friend in poetry.

~Angel~

Author notes

A contest entry for:

*~The Earth is God's Canvas~* [The author is Unknown]
by PrabhuDayal Khattar

The quote above is the prompt.

Contest Requirements: Please write a poem inspired by the quote.

Around 20 lines.

No rules.



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    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression? Line numbers
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Comments

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  • ckwriter69 silver member
    July 27

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    I've been there and seen it. It is wonderful to see the sun appear to sink into the sea. The colors on the ocean are fantastic. Thanks for sharing your wonderful write and congrats on the bronze.


  • Jeremy0826 gold member
    July 26

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    Simply Beautiful!

    Wow, this is such a gorgeous write! I can't believe
    that you only got a bronze for this one. You really have a way of captivating and almost hypnotizing me with your words. A lot of serenity and beauty seep through here. I love your background, it adds so much depth and feel to your poem. All of your descriptions and soft tones makes me want to read it over and over again. I think I will! lol

    Awesome as always my friend! Thanks so much for sharing lovely piece here!





    Jeremy0826

    • Jeremy0826


      hi Jeremy,Thanks once again for the applause and your wonderful comment on this write.I appreciate your thoughts dearly my friend.I am pleased that you enjoyed the read.
      Take care my friend and much love and happiness to you.
      ~Angel-anne~
  • Hey from where you come with a thought of melody and where you go with a sense of awe..I am really not aware..just amazed...well done and my thanks for entering my contest...

    • thanks so much for your kind comment ,I appreciate your thoughts.Take care dear friend,blessings to you.
      ~Angel-anne~
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