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The Feeling

I want to be close enough to taste
To smell
To have every sense alert.
This feeling of being so unchasted,
As if he cast a spell,
Is in this place which I convert.

Waiting for him to return
Makes me realise what I consistently deny.
I dont understand what he is feeling
Or even thinking; It makes me want to cry.





The feeling is like being fed up:
At which point your world comes to an end.
Imagine a small, rounded, broken cup;
Its too hard to amend.

Its happening now
I can tell he doesnt really care.
He realises what he has done to me;
I never want to go back there.

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  • BeautifulNightmare
    July 23, 2008

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH.
    Ahh. Ahh. Ahh.......
    Thats me screaming in frustration coz i know how you feel.
    This all sucks

    xxx


  • sensualbutterfly
    July 23, 2008
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    How sad. I feel your pain. I really do. Thank you for entering