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Take Cover

And when the weather is stormy
Do you know what it feels like?
No, I don't think so
And when the rain is pouring
Rain drops,
Rain drops
Falling down on the Earth
Do you know what it sounds like?
Listen
Listen
Silence
Shut up and listen
Now the wind is blowing
And the thunder is rolling over our heads
The lightening flashes
There's a strom
Take cover

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inspired by a rainy day when i was by myself

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  • x-Pretty-Odd-x
    August 14

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    there r a few typos which I shall point of for u in a bit so that u can fix them up and then no one else can bug u bout them lol but anyway, I so remember following ur link thing on netlog and reading this poem thinger. and I must say, it's quite fantastic, another amazing write. good job. =]

    and here r the spelling errors:

    line 1: 'whe' should be 'when'
    line 4: 'reain' should be 'rain'
    line 7: 'fallind' should be 'falling'

    lol and I think that was all of them, no ofense meant of course by pointing them out lol just figured u'd want to fix them up. lol but anywho excellent poem.

    x-Pretty-Odd-x <3