Lightning scribes begin to pen,
their thunderous upheaval.
While watching, witnessing,
mortals love raging forth.
Never knowing what lies hidden,
between the stands of hormonal concupiscence.
Which potentially jeopardizes romance,
destroying every faithful thread,
until all arousal ceases,
creating the everlasting split.
Author notes
around 10 lines
Prompt:
2-Written between the lines of love and lust
Inspiration from a storm....
A contest entry
- Pif by luna-midnight.
450 points, ended July 23, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Let me know how I did....
Comments
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nicely done. i like the use of storm descriptions
wonderful job and take care
good luck, Stephanie ♥
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